Reader Feedback

Write what you
actually felt.

Thank you for reading Eat Yours Before It Melts. This form has nine questions and will take about fifteen minutes. There are no right answers. Honest reactions — including critical ones — are more useful to me than polished praise. Publishers know the difference between genuine reader responses and collected compliments.

* Required

Your name
Email *
Before we begin

Did you finish the manuscript? *

01

In two or three sentences, describe what this book is about in your own words. *

Not the plot summary — what it is about. What you would tell someone asking why they should read it.

02

Did the opening make you want to keep reading? Where, if anywhere, did your attention drift? *

03

Which moment, scene, or line stayed with you most — and why? *

04

Was there anything that felt unclear, confusing, slow, or that took you out of the story? *

This is the most useful question. Specific is better than general.

05

Did the ending feel earned? Did it leave you with the right feeling? *

06

Overall, how would you rate the manuscript? *

Did not work for meOutstanding
07

Who would you recommend this book to, and how would you describe it to them in one or two sentences? *

Your words here often end up in a query letter. Write honestly.

08

What other books does this remind you of?

Optional, but useful for positioning. Any genre, any era.

Goes directly to Zafar. No newsletters, no third parties.
Thank you. Your feedback has been received and will be read carefully. If you left an email and I have questions, I will be in touch.